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Review:Tris says:
Yes I love Al more because if the speech... I guess "baby time". Maia is kind of a huge brat. Ahhahaha i. Cannot wait for scorrose to come back! This chapter had good content but kind of an odd flow with pov/perspective from in ALS head like he was talking to a group to first person events. It was slightly odd. But really did like the story line. Can't wait great more!!

Author's Response: Hey!
I thought you might!
Maybe... You'll only have to wait another two chapters to find out!
Maia kind of is a huge brat be to be honest that's how I see Scorose's first born... I mean she can quite easily get whatever she wants... And I guess Rose would say no but Aliv don't follow the same set of rules!
OKAY, so a lot happens in two chapters... Scorose come back too!
Sorry. I'm glad you liked the content but I'm sorry it was all an odd flow... I shall work on it. BUT... to mix things up in the next chapter, you get to hear from 3 different POVs. Fingers crossed it works... (It's in the queue now by the way)
Hopefully you won't have to wait long!

*internet hugs*

Emz xxx

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