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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi Laura!

First of all ahahahahahahah Ted and Andromeda love!!! There is never enough of them which is such a shame so sorry while I squeal away that someone has actually written a story about them because it so rarely happens!

Secondly, the structure of this was so great with the different sections and the varying size. What really made a success was how each one had a different mood and tone to the other and I could tell that you really took care to make sure it reflected the changes in Andromedaís life. I have to say that I think the smaller ones might have even been my favourite as the quick snapshot into her life was so captivating the images stayed in my mind for a while.

Andromedaís character was really well written with her reflective thoughts and how she sometimes lacks confidence in herself. Thereís a bit towards the end where she wishes she was more like Bella, but I find that she almost does have that fiery edge to her with the way she ran away and how Tonks was conceived before the marriage as both of those went against the norms of her life and showed she did have the spirit we see Tonks. She was just such a wonderfully complex character and I think you wrote all her layers really well.

Andromeda and Tedís relationship was really well written too and you showed how it progressed with age really well with the innocent but sweet love at the beginning, to the more passionate and then the complacent but comforting love at the end. It was just so lovely to see them at all the stages of their life. Ah, then in the final scene when he was apologising for making them targets it really made me sad, but then their love is so strong she just accepted that and stayed with him. Gah, sorry for rambling I love this pair a little too much :P

Finally, one thing I forgot to say was that I liked how you made Andromeda continually haunted by the shadow of her being a Black as it showed how your origins can never leave you. It was also really great how they always lurked away in the back of her mind as it showed us how her life could have differed and another perspective when the wars occurred.

I really loved this one-shot in case you couldnít tell :P

-Kiana

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