Whoo, hi Emily! (also, awesome job on your first parody, it had me giggling away!)
Wah, this narration was just amazing I canít even tell you how great it was! It just had the right amount of humour mingled with irony to make it a perfect parody and I really enjoyed it. Another thing which I really loved was the use of brackets as it worked so well with the narratorís style as it seemed as if they had superior intelligence when they used it which just made it even funnier. Gah, I seem as if Iím not explaining myself properly but either way I loved it!
Hahaha, Greyback had me laughing way too much and you characterised him so well because I could still clearly see signs of him in there despite it being a parody. I think my favourite thing was how he wanted to know what blood type the voice because that would confirm their love or not. Also, the way he was just like voice, voice, where are you because true love is the most important thing when in the middle of a battle :P
Suddenly Voldemort Voldemort, his leader and guru in all things that were not love, caught his eye and promptly began a series of spastic movements with his eyebrow and noseĖhole, - this was just amazing, ah, I just never thought he would be called a guru and yeah excuse me while I die at the idea of that :P
Sybil was just fab! I guess her prediction was sort of correct with Greyback having a good side to him albeit one lurking very deep within him, but she had to be her usual self and make Harryís life much more dramatic than it actually is. I loved her exchange with Greyback though as I didnít think those characters would go well together but they actually did and I really need a follow up to this story with the way you left it, perhaps we can see Sybil deciphering the future with blood? :P
Great story, Emily!
Author's Response: Yay, hi Kiana! Thank you so much, I was pretty nervous posting but I had a blast writing it. :D
Oh yay, I'm so so glad that you think so! I actually didn't mean for this to be very ironic while I was writing it but irony is one of my favourite forms of humour and I guess that just showed in the final product :P Ooh, I'm really glad that you liked the use of brackets as I as afraid that was going to be too rambly. Oh no, you're explaining yourself perfectly and thank you for all the amazing compliments!
Oh wow, I'm so happy that you liked my characterisation of Greyback! I didn't know whether or not all traces of his old character in the HP series was lost in this parody but I'm really glad that you could see how he was still the same character because bits of him from the HP series was still there.
Well, Voldemort is the leader of the Death Eaters and he was the one who knew everything about death and love, so he could plausibly be called a guru (well, in this totally random parody he could, anyway :P)
Ahaha, thank you! Sybil's predictions make her look like a fake but there might actually be a nugget of truth to them all... :P And yeah, I think she has a thing for making poor Harry's life either more difficult or far easier than it actually should be, hah. I also had no clue that Greyback and Trelawney would go well together until this, but I'm really glad you liked the interactions between the two!
Thanks for the amazing review, Kiana!