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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Hi!

I'm going through all of the challenge entries and reviewing them before posting the results!! I really liked the way that you incorporated the song with this story. I thought it was really interesting and intense and it definitely fit the song really well. I could feel all of the intensity the whole time, which was something I really liked. Basically, amazing use of integrating the song into the story.

I also really liked the topic you chose to write about and the way you did it. I thought it was unique, and interesting and my heart broke for Sirius every paragraph. You did a really good job of conveying emotions and making me feel bad for him, and how broken he was. I wanted to just hug him and be there for him. I wish he could've held Harry and killed Peter and just ugh, so many things. Imagine how different it would've been.

Great job with the whole piece, this was a really great story to read. Thanks so much for entering and participating in the challenge! Good luck!!

xoxo Sarah ♥

Author's Response: Thanks for the review (and for third place!)

That was definitely one of my main focuses, trying to keep Sirius tense and the mood serious (pardon the pun) throughout. I was a little concerned about the way Sirius just seems to get really angry again all of a sudden once Hagrid left; whether that would seem unrealistic. I'm glad you don't seem to think so :)
This moment's always been on my list of scenes I wanted JK Rowling to write, but never did. It's always been a great fascination of mine, the parts of stories never written. It's fascinating to imagine how a character would deal under that emotional stress, and Sirius has always been a fabourite character of mine. Emotions in writing have never been my strong point, though, so I'm glad you liked that part!
I really wish it had gone differently, too, but I suppose this isn't an AU story... *sigh*

Thankyou for the really enjoyable challenge, and for third place!

awesomepotter xxx


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