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Review:paddlewaddle says:
God I love this chapter - just so much plain simple love and acceptance from everyone. Those feels! I honestly love Vivian - a total b*, but an honest and completely loveable one. I can appreciate Draco and Astoria being worried and I think I now understand that when they originally did not approve the relationship, it wasn't because they had some misguided judgement about Rose herself, but rather that they knew their relationship would be extremely difficult given the past and they didn't want to put Scorpius through that. I do love your parent/child dynamic in this story. Whilst we always seem to think that the Draco and Ron over reacted about the relationship out of midguided hate, I think we often forget that Ron and Draco love their children more than anything and to see them hurt is perhaps the most difficult thing any parent has to go through and the only way to do that is to protect them - misguided protection yes, but protect them none the less.

I think this is one of my favourite post-marriage scenes in this story - it just reveals so many things about all the characters that makes me fall in love with them even more!

With that, I really hope Ron comes around soon maybe? the unveiling of the mysterious letter will reveal all! Although I am utterly scared - if this is good times, DOES THAT MEAN A CHAPTER CALLED 'BAD TIMES' is coming? The calm before the storm? D:

I'm curious as to what the storyline will be for part 3 and 4. I love this story so much - I spent so much time rereading my favourite chapters of Part 2 while waiting for new updates! Scorose alone time always gives me so much feels because even if the tension of forbidden love are no longer there, they never seem to lose that spark :)

Author's Response: I really like writing Vivian way to much. She is a horrible horrible person but she has her moments and she is a good character to have if I ever want to rock the boat because people already hate her. I think you are right about Draco and Astoria. Originally the Draco Rose scene was much longer and much more detailed about why Draco was against Rose and Scorpius to begin with in school, but the more I wrote the more it felt like too much. But as for their relationship now I think you are right on with why they were apprehensive about it. Parents worry about their kids and unfortunately parents are always going to want to protect their kids even if they are adults. Its nice to see that some people can see the overall feel of the parent child. I get a lot of hate for Ron, and it's always awkward justifying him, because Ron is wrong in the decisions he makes, but at the same time, is he wrong for loving his daughter so much that he wants to protect her?
So glad that you liked the chapter, this honestly wasn't my favorite chapter, I think it covered a lot of things that needed to be addressed, but it wasn't really plot moving.
Ron may come around he is about to experience somethings that may change his views, unfortunately Rose may not completely agree with them. I know ambiguous. I don't think I will name a chapter bad times, but things are definitely about to become stirred up a bit. I really think the next chapter will start to shape the last two chapters of the story and give a small insight to where this story is going. By the end of the story you will defiantly see what number three is going to be and the direction it is going to take. While I can't give anything away from part 3, not even the name because it will be way to obvious, I can say a few small things about 4.
It may be based about 4ish-5ish years in the future.
It may be a bit unrelated to the three previous story lines because of the time gap and theme.
And it may be set back in London.
So there. Thank you for the review. Updates will be coming soon, because I want this story finished and I want to move on to part 3.


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