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Review:Aphoride says:
Hey there! Dropping by from the BvB review battle! :)

Okay, so I love these kinds of missing moments stories, particularly with Tonks and Remus, because they're such a lovely, lovely couple! ;) Plus, it's not a story we see much of in the books, so it's so nice to see how it unfolds, you know?

But yes, I love the way you have Tonks in this. She's so sweet and so in love and really, really wants to go and fight - but I liked how it was because Remus was there, not just because she's an Auror and it's 'what she does', you know? It was a real, true reason for it because that is often the biggest, most important thing. I also loved her interactions with her mother, and how worried she was, and how her emotions contrasted in all the sections - that was really lovely!

Remus was great too! I loved how you made him so happy when they got married, but then as soon as she got pregnant because he was scared, he panicked, and then blamed himself. It's such a sad time for him, I think, but I loved how even though it was from Tonks' pov, there wasn't all that much hate and anger and things - it was more like she understood, you know? She wanted to explain and she wanted him to be okay with it, but she got it when he wasn't. So sad! I loved their reunion scene when he got back, though - that was gorgeous! So sweet :)

Your writing in this was gorgeous, too! There wasn't buckets of description, but I liked it without it all, tbh - there was just enough in this. It flows so beautifully and your word choice is just so great. I'm so impressed at the length of this too - how you managed to make their story so compact, and yet there's so much emotion in it nonetheless.

The end was chilling. Wow.

So yeah, I really enjoyed reading this - I'm really glad I stopped by and picked this one. It's really, really good! :)

Aph xx

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