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Review:Remus says:
Dan!! :D

I'm very excited to read this!! You were my inspiration to write Plot of Power so it's exciting to see a new Post-Hogwarts fic from you!! Maybe it'll motivate me to write chapter 5 today!

Let's get this review started, no? :D

Kaspar Teufelshunde--How did you think of that name...?

Why would the Aurors use muggles as bait? Cops would get in trouble for using civilians, for putting their lives in danger. How did the Aurors get away with it?

Wait, gah! That was brilliantly played! Mary Goldsmith was in on it and is an Auror. How did she do it? How did she break away from the curse? Was she faking it the whole time? So many questions by this point!

Kaspar seems like a very nasty fellow. I do like, however, his personality. When it comes to OCs they can be boring and very Gary/Mary-Stu. Even when they're evil like Kaspar. You, however, managed to make him a very interesting man. I'm not even a little bit surprised. It's you! What I like the most about him is that he has no qualms about killing anyone. Even when it's not necessary. He even goes beyond the killing and makes it a show. An overkill. Yeah, I know that it's weird that I like that in a character but that's what makes them interesting. Darker and more complex when it comes to the brain and train of thoughts.

I was hoping to see Harry in here but alas! Now I have to wait for the next chapter to see him. How far along is this after the war? Are we going to see my favorite pairing (Astoria/Draco)?

As you can see, I'm uber excited about this. *flails* And I can't wait to see where this is going.

As always, a wonderful read Dan!

Until next time!

--Rosie

Author's Response: Hi, Rosie! Thanks for stopping by!

I think I did some google translating to put Kaspar's last name together, but I'm rather embarrassed to say that I don't remember what it was supposed to mean. I know it made good sense at the time! ;)

You'll find out all about "Mary Goldsmith" in the next chapter. You're correct that she was not what she seemed.

I'm really pleased that you thought Kaspar had depth. It almost feels like a waste, because this is his only appearance in the story. He spends the rest of it in a Ministry holding cell. He is something of an artisan when it comes to killing. Those Durmstrang boys...

You'll see Harry in the next chapter, in all his Harry-ness. Draco and Astoria won't be appearing in this story. It's set about three years after the Dark Lord's death, so assume that they're happily married and Astoria is well on the way to curing him of the wickedness he used to allow into his life.

I'm planning on having the next chapter up in about a week. It's already written and mostly edited. I'd post it sooner, but then the wait for chapter 3 would seem long by comparison. ;)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!


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