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Review:Ravenclaw333 says:
Ooh, things are getting interesting! I like Rose's role in this chapter - she and Albus obviously have quite a close relationship, and I like how you've dealt with her career crisis and not wanting to disappoint her mother. Having her talk to Brandon was a nice touch, and helps develop both of them a bit further outside their relationships with Albus.

Albus himself has certainly been busy! You've handled his different feelings for Scorpius and Brandon well, without any kind of moralising about whether he should or shouldn't be kissing them, which is really refreshing to see. Obviously the seeds for some future tension have been sown here though, and I look forward to seeing where this goes!

Author's Response: Hello!

You get a prize for being the first to review this chapter. By prize, I mean a thank you!

Albus and Rose are quite close. I feel like they were a bit distant in Pure Intentions because of Albus' broken heart. I will be having more scenes where Al isn't at teh center of everything. :) Mainly because I like variety.

Albus will keep on kissing freely for a while - until he heart makes him pick one. I didn't think it would do the plot well for him to agonize over what to do and not do anyhting instead. ;) Oh, there will be quite a bit of tension between Al et al.

Thank you so much for a wonderful review! I hope to hve more out in a few days.


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