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Review:HufflePuff_Blitz says:
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Sorry it took me so long Sam. I keep forgetting to do this :/.
Anyways. I really enjoyed this. I liked the light and airy tone of this chapter and how you portrayed Narcissa not liking the parties. Also the slip ins about James, Sirius, Bella, and Andromeda. I hate to admit this but I also like Lucius's character so far.
The only wierd thing I noticed was the mention of Dobby. While it was nice to see, I don't know how well house elf's age, but in the books Dobby didn't seem like an older house elf to me, but i'm not sure.
I liked reading this and I promis I'll get to the next review as soon as I can!
-Kyle :)

Author's Response: Hey, Kyle!

No worries. I do the same thing, though I try not to.

I tried to make it sort of fairy tale-esque in a way. The ball and the guests, but then there's Narcissa disagreeing with it all because she knows it's not a fairy tale. Lucius is a complex guy. ;)

Dobby. Dobby got added because I also see Dobby as a young elf - compared to others anyway. And when Lucius is a teenager, Dobby is practically a baby (if House Elves are...). Just telling him that Narcissa was in the room was his job. Dobby being there his whole life, therefore being well informed of the consequences of telling Harry about the Malfoys in CoS just made sense to me when I wrote it. Dobby is also there because I love him. But mostly the first reason. If that makes sense. :)

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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