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Review:Ravenclaw333 says:
Heya! Here for that review swap you offered!

I did intend to read this story anyway, so thanks for the opportunity! (and a reason to actually review as I go, rather than ploughing through the whole thing and leaving a brief couple of lines on the last chapter, like I did with Pure Intentions)

This is a really good first chapter - even if you're not sure about it, you've set the scene really well in terms of the relationships between all these boys. I love how Albus has progressed from using romance as a crutch to being able to let go and have a bit of fun with other guys like Derrick - that was a nice touch and shows exactly how far he's come from Pure Intentions.

The obvious tension between him and Scorpius, and the enduring attraction between him and Brandon really promises to make things interesting as the story progresses - I can't wait to see where you go with this!

I really like the relationship between James and Albus too. They seem to be best mates and flatmates as much as brothers, and it's really nice to see that connection and easy friendship between them. Albus being wingman for James was a perfect way of cementing that.

Overall an awesome start, can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hello!!!

Whoo! It'll be interesting to get your feedback throughout.

Whew, I'm really glad it sets the stage well. I dunno, first chapters are always kind of weird for me. Albus has progressed quite a bit from his emotional crutch status in Pure Intentions.

hehe, I liked making him still into both guys. Most of the story will be about them and whether they get back together. :D

After Pure Intentions, I thought I had ignored James a bit too much and it seemed like a good idea to show their relationship more. I like to think they're pretty close although they can annoy each other. They kind of remind me of Bill and Charlie sometimes (or at least how I imagine they were).

Thank you so much for a wonderful review! I hope to have the next chapter out this weekend.


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