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Review:hedera says:
Ah, this was so adorable! Your writing is completely wonderful, and the humorousness of this piece certainly shone through. I particularly liked Teddy's thoughts on his children forming a quidditch team because, really, what else would you think of when you were about to have a baby?

While I don't have children, I grew up with quite a big family, and I can definitely identify with the Lupin family. The shouting, the noise, the lateness and the mess (oh, the mess) were all big features of my childhood, and you portrayed them so well here.

I thought your writing, the mix of dialogue and description, was really great. It created a very clear picture for me in my mind (like a little tv show haha), without being to slow or heavy!
So, overall, what I think I really need to say, is that I'm a /really/ big fan of yours, and that this is another really great fic which made me laugh a lot!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

I have to admit, I crack up writing Teddy Lupin. His internal monologue was fun to do. Usually he's a side character while his wife gets more screen time, so it was fun to devote a point of view to him. He really does want his own Quidditch team made entirely of his own children.

I only have two kids, and am one of four myself. My husband is third of six boys and some of the stories he tells, oof. It makes me glad I don't have that many kids! Teddy and Victoire are crazy to want so many haha. She handles it well though. The messes are pretty epic with this many.

Thanks for the review, and for the lovely compliments :) I appreciate it!

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