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Review:dracodarlingxx says:
AW they're back together x
too cute, too cute :*
loving the ci; sarah's looks evilll
and i love sarah's little flashback to her and rose crushing on james and scor xx and al's pov was great, 'cos it was nice to hear that scor is still thinking about rose :D

p.s. i'm thinking about writing a next gen fanfic like this (but not pregnancy, because i can't write that), so any tips? xx

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Sarah's flashback to her and Rose crushing on Scorpius and James made me smile - I had to put it in!! :)

I'm so happy you like the story so far. To write this story, I had to stop reading ALL next gen fanfiction - a lot of it was so good that it made me want to try and rewrite it in my story, but I couldn't. So that's number one for me.

Number two is remember that there are less rules for writing next gen compared to Hogwarts era and Marauders era - the next gen characters are loosely described, it gives you a lot to play with. Try to consider the personality traits of children created by Harry and Ginny, children created by Ron and Hermione - they'd be a real force of nature wouldn't they! Consider what Harry/Ron/Hermione are up to these days. Consider how their fame would affect their children and family.

Most of all, have fun with it. I did!

-Sarita x

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