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Review:kenpo says:
Hey! Happy forum-versary!

This was a delightful one-shot! I think this was a great approach to the challenge. I love the idea of having Slytherins in these different categories. Being a neutral Slytherin, as you described them, can't be easy.

I love Blaise's characterisation! You did an awesome job with it, and I have this great sense of the type of person he is. He seems nice. I get the feeling that you've got other stories that feature him... am I right? Or are you just good at developing characters?

The ending was fantastic. Hermione's wave and then the line about the other students sitting a little bit closer to them was just... fantastic.

Really, this was a fantastic one-shot. Well done!

-Georgia

Author's Response: Hello!

Yeah, this was how I imagined Slytherin to be. Partly because they couldn't all be evil and partly because they wouldn't all be obediently loyal to their parents. I'm glad you liked the idea.

Blaise is awesome, in my humble opinion. He's not a saint, but he's not evil either. He does what he thinks is best, even if others don't agree, and knows his own sense of write and wrong. Hence the job he wants. I have written him a couple of times, but nether as a main character (though I intend to, according to this novel plan I have). I have Blaise planned in my head, know him very well now. :)

The end. I loved the end. I'm glad you did, too.

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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