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Review:potterfan310 says:
Ahhh new chapter, yay! :D

James, oh how I love him. He is just brilliant and I adore his and Rose's relationship as cousins/friends.

Awww, poor James for having to tell Sarah, it can't have been easy. Him giving her 'Forgive me jewellery' is so cute and I like that he thought of that to sort of soften the blow, because James is an absolute cutie. He needs happiness.

It's super interesting to see Sarah's POV especially the things about how she's focused on James and I love it. There could be a chance for them yet! ♥

Oooh Albus' POV, well this is new! Bless Scorpius, he needs to talk to Rose really, and not via Al. It's sweet that he's worried though. I'm actually surprised to find that it was Albus who Sarah went too. So long as they don't get together and are friends, I will forever be happy.

Her plan is interesting! I seriously hope this is going to be the push that her and James need to get back together for good! ♥ "I love you. I've always loved you," she said anxiously looking up at me," - THIS MAKES ME SO HAPPY I MEAN YAY!

Can't wait for the next one!

-Potterfan310
Sophie xx

Author's Response: Yes, James has had it rough recently - he never wanted to watch Sarah's relationship with Danny progress to the point where she loved him, but it did. And everyone suffers - nobody gets off easy from this I'm afraid!

I'm glad you liked having Sarah's POV - I have to admit I didn't put her POV across enough in this fic, but when I do I try to make it count :)

Yes, Albus' POV was so fun to play with.I wanted to put his view across to show that he is an unlikely shoulder to cry on for everyone on occasion.

I'M GLAD IT MADE YOU SO HAPPY - IT MADE ME HAPPY TOO :D

Thanks as ever :)

-Sarita x


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