Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:ginnypotter242 says:
NO! No, no, no I refuse to believe that actually happened. Please tell me Lily was having a horrible nightmare brought on by the tea Glitter gave her?

I liked Elliot! He was so sweet, how could he do that? He was such a jerk to her when she found out too- calling her naive and all that (though, considering the title of the story, a very nice touch). I'm glad she got her little revenge though- it was perfect. That breakup scene (the first one) was great, the emotions Lily was feeling were really well written, as well as Elliot's emotions (and the sneaky little liar seemed so sincere!)

The scene with Mark at the beginning was great- I loved the turn of the tables by making him bisexual. It wouldn't be Glitter that he had been on a date with, would it?

Lovely chapter as always, even if it did make irrationally angry at fictional characters. Can't wait for the next one!


Author's Response: Nope! All true! :D

He was always going to be a massive meanie! I had it planned from the start and it was a weird coincidence -- but about a month ago I learnt in psychology that psychopaths were very charming so we can say he's a psychopath ;)

Ooh, that would have been a good plot twist but nah it wasn't! It was just a random fling tbh :P

Ahh thank you so much for reviewing! I hope you like the next one! It's the last chapter but I really enjoyed writing it! :)

- Kayla :)

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 752
Submit Report: