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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Hey Sathya! Here with the review exchange :)

This was a really cute start to your story! I love fluff, and I already feel connected to it and excited to see what happens!

I also have a character named Alice Longbottom in 2 of my stories, so seeing you portray her differently than I do is really cool :) I never would have pegged Alice as liking History of Magic - usually you would think that Herbology would be the class that Alice would like so it's interesting to see how different of a person she is and how she isn't like her father in that way :) I'm excited to see how her character develops and if she opens up about herself to Freddie!

It was kind of sad how Freddie didn't realize who Alice was right away, haha. Poor girl must feel so invisible! I'm glad that he finally figured out who she was though. How ironic the only girl in the library was somebody who he kind of knew :p

I wonder if Freddie is going to go back and read the other steps in the book or if he's going to wing it and try talking to Alice by himself? It should be interesting to see if he's able to get her as a date for Valentines Day! :D

all in all, this was a really nice start to your story and I can't wait to read what happens next :)


Author's Response: Hello Amanda!

I'm so sorry for taking this long to respond to your wonderful review! I haven't updated this story for a while and this was the perfect motivation to get me back on track!

I think Alice Longbottom has almost become canon by now, but I'm totally checking out those two stories! I know, Alice being Neville's daughter and all would have probably liked Herbology too, but I thought this would be an interesting twist. Plus no one likes History of Magic, so I was curious to see how that would pan out.

I sort of know how Alice would feel, being in a school with so many children in my class. It's really easy to forget names when you have 150 of them to remember! Still, the two of them are practically family friends so I'm just going to peg it down to Freddie's terrible memory when it comes to names :P

You should totally come back when the next chapter's up to see if some of your great questions are answered. I'm not going to spoil it for you yet!

Thanks so much for all the words of encouragement and your opinion, as I mentioned earlier it was the perfect catalyst to get me back to writing the story!

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