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Review:lumos_knox says:
Hello, here from the review swap!

This is a fantastic story so far. The plot and description is absolutely chilling! I feel so sorry for Harry and Sirius, it must be so awful for them to go through this.

The description in this story is perfect, you describe everything just right. The description of Devlin's eyes is beautiful, the forest green. It scares me when I read about Voldemort, all the red eyes and hissing. Excellent stuff!

I feel super scared reading the last line, about Devlin. Such a cliffhanger!

Your idea of Harry as an Auror is quite good, as it shows that Harry is sick of playing the hero all the time and everything he bottles up can be lost. As stated in the HP books, the world isn't split into good and evil. Harry can't be good all the time. All this loss and pain amounts to the sort of ruthlessness that Harry exhibits. You've portrayed this darker side of Harry quite well.

All in all, this is an excellent novel so far, I can't wait to see what it's in store for poor old Harry, Alex and Sirius.

Thanks for writing!
-lumos_knox

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