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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello! I love whenever I see a new chapter of this! I just want to know what's going to happen! :D

I LOVE the chocolate bunny/April Fools gift! It was pure genius! :D

Although, I noticed a teensy little error:

Unfortunately, Albus wasn't their most of the day, since he worked on the potion

You've just put the wrong 'there' in this sentence ;)

I feel bad for Albus. The poor guy has his whole schedule mucked up but the rest of them are generally fine! I know that he kicked Rose and David out but still! If only they were as good as him! :(

When you wrote that Albus needed to get seven shrivelfigs but grabbed eight, I was about to point out that you made a mistake somewhere but then I read on and was like, "Aaahhh that makes sense." :P

Anyway, I can't wait to read the next chapter! Exciting you say?! :D :D :D

- Kayla :)

Author's Response: I made up the chocolate bunny gift spur of the moment. That's what happens to most of my ideas, except for the ones relating to the plot.

Yes, I did put the wrong "there"! Usually I automatically correct that as I'm writing, but I must have missed this.

Albus does have a busy schedule, and thank goodness Art helps him out. Rose and David would have been way to distracting, and if you're doing a complicated potion you shouldn't have any distractions!

Yes, unfortunately, Albus did not realize his mistake of grabbing eight shrivelfigs. Lucky for him, Rose helped him fix it.

Yes, the next chapter is very exciting. There are only three chapters left!


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