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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
Hey there :).

Okay, there are several things that I love about this so far. The first is Teddy's reaction to Victoire when he's woken from his sleep. He's panicked and excited and it's very endearing to see him so enthusiastic about the situation -- even to the point of nearly leaving the house in boxers and socks.

Then there's the bit of foreshadowing, as Victoire assures Teddy that everything will be fine, and that he shouldn't worry. It makes what happens all the more heart-breaking, because this is supposed to be a happy moment, where a family is created.

Instead, the readers are met with a truly heartbreaking scene, where Victoire is lost, and Teddy grieves. So many feels :(. I think you did a great job with his reaction, by the way. There are so many different reactions that you could have chosen, but this one feels just right.

As the tragedy is still settling, Teddy holds his son, and something tells me that it will be okay, eventually. It will be definitely interesting to see how Teddy manages to raise his son as a single parent.

It's so sad, and promising! Great job!

-Rumpel

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