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Review:toomanycurls says:
THIS REIVEW MIGHT BE IN ALL CAPS BECAUSE I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER AND THERE'S ONLY A FEW MORE CHAPTERS AND I KNOW I VALIDATED SOME OF YOUR EDITS BUT I WASN'T READING IT READING IT. SO. I'M EXCITED.

okay, I'll try not to shout the whole time.

Sirius' joke about being a back-up singer is quite hilarious with the Quibbler article that comes out about him later on.

:-o I am excited for Melanie to be part of the Order!!! Aw, Sirius is so protective. They could be snogging during his confession of love and not wanting to lose her (FYI).

SNOGGING!!! WHOOO!! I literally cheered.

Oh come on, Mandy, it's not an invitation to die. Just... not a very long life expectancy.

Of course Sirius thinks he can just stroll into the Ministry and sign up to be an auror. *sigh*

THEY SHOULD LIVE TOGETHER AND YOU SHOULD WRITE A NOVEL ABOUT THAT WITH A LOT OF SNOGGING.

Ugh, I'm disappointed in Mandy for not joining the Order.

why did you have to end on such an optimistic, ironic note??!! I'll be back soon.

grr

-Rose

Author's Response: HI THAT'S OKAY I LOVE ALL CAPS REVIEWS.

oh wow you know I wasn't even thinking of the Quibbler article when I wrote that bit! (Or at least I don't think I was... don't remember anymore.) Haha I'm glad you enjoyed that though.

Sirius is protective of her but I think only within reason because Melanie is pretty independent and stubborn, and he knows that haha. And yes, you guessed right - yay for snogging! :p haha that would not actually be that interesting of a novel, you know :p

Yep Mandy opted out.. honestly I think that wouldn't have been too uncommon, like once she finds out what she's getting into, it's a bit too much. Plus I didn't think I could get away with adding that many additional people to the Order when they weren't in that picture Harry gets of the 70s Order in the OotP book. One person's absence from the picture can be explained away, but not too many more.

Gah I know I'm terrible, I'm sorry :p Thank you so much for your review!!


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