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Review:Ravenclaw333 says:
This is another incredible chapter - you started strong with your opening chapter and you've really kept that going with this one. I felt for Rose this whole scene, with the party and the drunk man and just the overwhelming terror she felt, and the way you've set up her relationship with Scorpius as someone who makes her feel safe is so important. You've continued to include little snippets of them from their Hogwarts years, which gives their relationship added depth and history, and does a really good job at emphasising how close they are, and how important they are to each other.

I have to commend you again on how you deal with the issues in this story and your portrayal of Rose's anxiety - as I said before, I really felt for her in this scene, and I can't emphasise how important it is to see characters who struggle with things like this. Incredible job once again, and I'll definitely be back for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hi!

I was so excited to see that you came back for another chapter! I am glad to hear that you find Rose's emotional state portrayed realistically. I didn't want to gloss over the phases of dealing with a crisis when you are trying to keep it from everyone. I chose to start the story right around the two year anniversary of Rose's kidnapping, so that she has gone through (and is still going through) the emotional turmoil of it all, but is on the brink of being ready to move on.

I also am a huge ScoRose shipper, but I wanted this story to be more than just the two of them being together - they need each other. If you decide to read on, you will see that he needs her just as much.

Thanks for the review!

~Beth


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