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Review:toomanycurls says:
Hello!! Thank you for doing a review swap!

It's been a while since I've read this and I'm really excited to have a chapter from Devlin's perspective. He is clearly very clever, untrusting, and perhaps slightly skewed in how he sees things. His young mind is so twisted by Voldemort - the way he sees, what I'm guessing are safety precautions, as tricks against him. I also really admire Devlin's self-confidence - that he has more skill than they are aware of.

I love Harry's interaction with Devlin in the hallway. Harry seems so even-kheeled and like he's trying to patiently reach out to Devlin with love and logic. I have a feeling that it will take much more than that. Harry must feel horrid with his son acting so hostile towards him. You make me want to give everyone a hug.

Devlin's reflection while he's in his room is quite interesting. The way he sees the moon as a countdown for pain is perfectly poetic.

While Devlin is quite resistent to any sign of kindness from Harry, I feel like they might be able to get through to him. Eventually. I hope.

Harry's comment about Voldemort not mentioning Devlin was quite interesting. I think that will eventually lead to Harry really understanding how connected Voldemort is to Devlin.

Emma seemed so unsure of Devlin. I really can't blame her though.

Another wonderful chapter!

-Rose

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