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Review:Pretense Of Perfection says:
Another wonderful you have a beta by chance?

I really am beginning to get into this story. It's actually sort of similar to two short stories that I'm working on at the moment, as I always seem to read things similar to my work at the time.

I noticed a few grammatical errors and spelling mistakes, but nothing huge. I found it a little bit awkward reading wise when you wrote out the three numbers 1.) 2.) and 3.) listing why Cas didn't want Lily on her bed, but then again, I've always been a stickler for writing numbers out as words.

I really like that this seems to be one of the few Sirius/OCs out at the moment that doesn't focus on just their time at Hogwarts, but also after it as well.

Well, I'm off to read the next chappie. Keep posting!!

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