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Review:Ravenclaw333 says:
Here for the review battle!

This story caught my attention right away - Remus and Sirius are my ultimate OTP, and you've already encompassed everything I love about the pairing in this first chapter! The banter and the easy friendship between all four boys was really well done, and the way you've introduced the initial attraction between Remus and Sirius suits them and their situation well. I like the little details you give about their families as well - Sirius's comments about Regulus and the Tower of London, Peter and his Muggle family - you've put them all in their wider contexts and I enjoyed seeing some of the innovations you've come up with. Overall, brilliant first chapter!

Author's Response: Ah! Thank you so much!

It's kind of funny that I'm so into this ship because my OTP is Remus/Tonks.

I'm so happy that you like how I've handled their relationship. I really like writing bits from the Marauder Era - the friendships and intricacies are a delight to write. I couldn't make their friendship turn to romance over night but wanted it look like a long-coming emotional build-up.

It's so exciting that you liked the extra bits I threw in to make their world a little more comprehensive.

Thank you so much for an awesome review!


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