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Review:Pretense Of Perfection says:
Another great chapter! The pace is moving along perfectly so far.

Poor Sydney. Those boys are all so mean to her, I just want to smack their heads together. I'm sure they'll end up regretting it though.

I've noticed some typos and grammatical errors, but aside from that everything else is pretty good. Sirius and James are very much in character, and Sydney is different from a lot of other OCs out there that play up their confidence or nerdiness to excess, detracting from their overall characterization. She just seems so real, like an actual girl dealing with actual problems. Excellent job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The latest chapter is currently undergoing construction, however it won't take too long! Please keep reading and thanks for reviewing!

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