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Review:Pretense Of Perfection says:
I've always been a sucker for a good Sirius/OC, and I feel like I may have found a good one!

That being said, I just want to point out that Hagrid wasn't the Magical Creatures Professor when the Marauders went to are free of course free to use creative license to change stuff like this, but since I tend to overlook small details like that, I just figured I'd point it out.

I think you're off to a very strong start..the bit about the flobberworms was brilliant, very in character for the Marauders. I can't wait to see how the rest of the story unfolds, and good luck in your writing!

Author's Response: Thank you much, I know, I think I was not really with it the day I wrote this chapter but it is amended in a later chapter. Thanks so much!

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