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Review:Leonore says:
Hi! Here from RRT.

Beautiful story! A lot of people say that Ginny's a Mary-Sue, but they should read this - she's a real strong female character. The way she spends so long thinking only of all the things she failed at and ignoring that she was as strong or stronger than the people she admired.

"four and a half broken ones" - why do you do this to me? You are a cruel person, you know that?

That paragraph about the wedding I think is my favourite bit of the whole story - that she's not going to wait for him to propose because she does things her way. Then such a brief picture of the wedding itself, you've created a beautiful picture and so in character. Especially Luna :)

And she's not going to be pushed around by a dumb manager. I love how she makes a stand and wins, not by force, just by letting everyone know what he's trying to do.

Lion hearted girl she really is. An amazing story, so well written. Great job!

- Leonore

Author's Response: Thank you! I have many angry words to say to people who think Ginny's a Mary-Sue - she's a character I will defend to the death, and this story is basically my way of doing that (in a slightly less aggressive/violent fashion)

I am a cruel person. I freely admit it.

I do like slipping in little details like that - there's so much you can do with a single line, and I'm glad I was able to get what I had in mind onto the page (especially Luna. I love Luna. What a sweetheart)

Ginny is an incredibly strong, independent and courageous character, and I'm just glad to have done her character some degree of justice with this piece. Thank you for the review!


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