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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Aw, hey again Sian. I figured I should get a move on these reviews!

Charlie's great. Really cute, especially the whole "I don't like girls" part! :P He sounds like me! And then Lavender sounded like you because whenever I say I don't like girls you say, "But I'm a girl" and haha that was sweet.

The flashback scenes are really powerful. You managed to capture the thrill so well, especially the part where she get's "branded by a thief" as that was really chilling.

I really love the little things Lavender thinks of, like when she talks about Charlie as if she's his mum and the whole parents should follow their own advice if they told Charlie to not ask questions. It really shows her mentality really well. I really liked that about it ♥

I also need to comment on the fact that the saving concept of this chapter was brilliant. It's about time. You show their friendship so excellently, which I really like in this piece.

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Hey Nadia!

I hadn't even made the connection between you and Charlie here but now that makes me laugh a lot :P Maybe Charlie's like the boy version of you?

I'm really pleased that you liked the flashback scenes. I thought they were important to try and show how much Lavender's suffering and to give an insight as to why she's having such a difficult time after the war.

I feel like Parvati and Lavender would have a really strong friendship, especially after all that they've been through together, and even though it's hard I think that Lavender needed someone like Parvati she could admit her weaknesses to. It was important for me that she was saved by a friend rather than a guy that came on the scene, because I wanted to show how deep and powerful friendship really can be.

Thank you so much for the lovely review!


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