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Review:HEG says:
Oh gosh, what an ending tot he story. I can't believe that Severus just went to meet Lord Alpha on his own. I'd be so scared if I was him. That's what I always struggle with: making the character sound truly scared but you've nailed that. Perfection. And I love the gulp. When he gulped, I actaullly thought that you were going to kill Severus with the Avada Kedava spell. Luckily, I was wrong. I'm so glad that you're bringing out a second book too. I'm really looking forwards to it. The tensions that you created at the start where awsome. You could really feel the build up and the descriptions were almost real.

Thank you for writing this for me (and thanks for the shout out :D)

HEG

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you :) I'm glad you thought it was believable *wipes brow* Phew!

Nope, Sev is still alive and kicking, and he has a whole new adventure ahead of him! This story was written with their future in mind, and this little extra chapter could prabobly be called Foreshadowing Overkill *hint hint*

Thank you for reading this story, you have made my year with all these reviews you've left and your dedication to this story. You totally deserved the shout out.

-Karou :D


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