Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:oldnumberseven says:
Ahhh, how have I not had the time to read this new chapter? Anyways, it was brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.

I love the way you give minor characters depth - for instance, the scene with the Hufflepuff Quidditch practice was hilarious. I love that you pointed out how Hufflepuffs don't respond well to threats, as well as the silly rhyming bit. I actually snorted out loud when I read that part, which wasn't a good choice, given that I was in the middle of taking a sip of Diet Coke :P

I'm interested to see what happens with Gil's love life ... but more interested to see what happens to Eden. I like that you're not focusing directly on her relationship with Sirius, but it pop up every once and awhile and makes a lovely appearance. So things seem like they are progressing naturally rather than all of a sudden.

:)

Author's Response: Oops, sorry about your Diet Coke! Heh, it's not a Quidditch chant without a cheeky rhyme, I think. I'm really excited to focus more on the Hufflepuffs, as I reckon they're secretly pretty cool, despite the wimpy stereotype. Thank you so very much for another lovely review! :)

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 746
Submit Report: