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Review:Veritaserum27 says:

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I really liked this piece. I thought you did a nice job of flitting through all the emotions of a typical pre-teen. I've always thought of Moaning Murtle (as I'm sure everyone else did) as an annoying and whiny character. I especially liked the part about how she would take all of the pain, just to feel the joys... That was really gut-wrenching.

I also never thought of the fact that Moaning Murtle wanted to be happy. She always seemed to me to enjoy being miserable and especially enjoy other people's misery. However, your descriptions of her emotions gave credence to her actions.

I think my favorite part is how fondly she remembers Ron, Hermione, Harry and even Draco. That made me chuckle to see a character who viewed all of those opposite characters in the same regard.

The constant images of the sun and the light area big part of how this story comes together. Light is associated with laughter and you, very appropriately, ended the story with that quote. Murtle longs for the light and the sun in the same way that she misses being happy and being able to laugh.

Great job!

Beth (Veritaserum27)

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