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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hi again Dan! Long time no see :D

I must say, I sure have missed this. It's just as thrilling as ever.

I truly loved the bit with Tonks. That was brilliant! You managed to grasp her character so well. Her dialogue always so fun to read as she's so hardcore and "sassy" in a way. Her attitude and recklessness is amazing and reminds me of Sirius, in a way.

And Moody! WOW. I have to say I loved the bit where he told Draco that he should cut his losses or something, can't remember the exact words but still very very cool. It felt so perfect for his character. Loved his interactions with Tonks as well.

You've always shown Narcissa as very strong, but we got to see a different side of her in this chapter. That whole moment where her eyes lit up in hope or pride, but then went back into gloom was very sad. And then that ending line.. wah ♥

And I must say, the whole dark mark pain part was brilliant as well. The little details of Lucius trying to seem all brave for Narcissa and then Bellatrix calling it "exquisite" those little moments were very well developed.

Brilliant writing!

Author's Response: Hello, hello! Truly a long time.

It was almost irrational how much fun I had writing the section with Tonks pretending to be Bellatrix. Aside from continuing to heap abuse on Draco, I really had a chance to use her abilities for something, you know, useful. Unlike pretty much every appearance by her character in the books.

Moody was also very entertaining to me. He makes it sound so simple, doesn't he?

Narcissa is very close to the breaking point in this chapter. It's a turning point of sorts for her, because she finally has to admit to herself that she and Draco are on their own and none of her family or old "friends" can or will help her. It's hard for her, but she ends up being stronger because of it.

I think of Bella as both a sadist and a masochist, so I'm quite sure she would have endured the pain of receiving her mark with relish. Lucius probably came close to crying like a baby. ;)

I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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