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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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This story was so wonderfully creepy! I really enjoyed the sort of M. Night Shyamalan-esque twist at the end (not to insult you witht the comparison t= though because his movies have gotten pretty lame). Peter is caught in such a mind game and I almost feel bad for him but then I don't because its Peter.

Speaking of Peter, I enjoyed the way you portrayed him here. He just seemed so weak and pathetic, which is exactly how I would picture him at this point. It was great to see the contrast between him and Snape; the man who risks everything for the one thing he believes in against the man with no convictions.

I have to say my favorite part of the story was the dialogue. The way that Snape talked to Peter, his words were just dripping with condescension and contempt. I totally read it in Alan Rickman's voice.

I look forward to catching up on more of your stories over the summer!

Author's Response: Hi, there.

I tried to conceal the twist for as long as I could, and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I don't think anyone should feel bad for Peter. He made his bed, now he's lying in it.

I was trying to portray Peter more in line with his book characterization than his movie characterization. In the movies, he was almost cartoonish. Fawning and pathetic. I didn't remember him that way from the books.

If Snape's voice sounded like Alan Rickman's Snape to you, then I accomplished what I set out to.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!


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