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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Hey there, I'm Amanda! We haven't met before, but I've seen you around the forums and I thought I'd stop by and read one of your stories! :)

This was a really great start to your story and I really enjoyed getting to read your version of Audrey. I haven't read much about her, but with all of your descriptions and how well you wrote her character, I feel like I know her really well already!

I really liked the way you started the story with her babysitter, too. It's like the Wizarding World wanted her from the beginning by throwing Lucy into her life and then years later, Percy! And the name Lucy, huh? Do I sense a bit of foreshadowing here? ;)

You've also already created such a nice depth to her, what with her relationship with her babysitter and parents, her financial problems, her roommate, and now the coffee shop and Percy. You seem to write her so effortlessly and I envy you for that!

I'm really excited to see where this story goes and can't wait to hear more about Percy and Audrey's relationship. Please update soon! :)


Author's Response: Why hello! Who know being on the forums would get be a bigger readership, eh? Thank you so much for taking the time to come check me out!

I'm so amazed that you think so highly of the story. Audrey definitely didn't come effortlessly as a character - I had to switch and change a lot of the stuff in the first chapter to make it seem more realistic.

Alas, never fear - the second (and final) chapter is in the queue! You'll find out all about Lucy's name in there ;) It should be up in a day or so by now so.

Thanks again for reading + reviewing!

- Jess xo

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