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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hi Isobel!

Please please please forgive how long this review has taken. I honestly just haven't managed to get around to any reviewing until now so I'm very sorry!

First things first, can I say how much I'm enjoying this story? I'm actually kind of sad I haven't got another chapter to read afterwards. I am letting my review thread close but I will keep my eye on it so I can continue reading it!

So your first AOC was about Roxie and Alicia's conversation. I thought you handled everything really well, especially as we now know everything that happened between Alicia and Albus. I must say, I feel so so sorry for Albus. Bless him that's so awful what she did. I can totally understand why Roxie acted the way she did toward Alicia, I would have acted that way too!

In the next scene I again thought you did a good job of the conversation. It flowed well and felt really natural. Alicia does come across a little selfish and determined to do whatever to get what she wants but I still find her really fascinating as a character so great job!

I honestly want to give you my theories on who Marin is but I really don't know. I get the feeling she's got some connection to the Muggle world as Alicia seems to think she would be good as a Muggle PR for the business... I also wonder if she's also the "Miss Perfect" she was looking for for the job!

Anyway, great chapter, I like the pace, it's keeping me interested and excited as to what's going to happen next! I want to know! I look forward to your next update!

Lauren :)

Author's Response: Hi Lauren,

Honestly, don't worry about it! I understand that real life takes priority to HPFF so it's fine, I'm not the fastest reviewer/responder either!

Ooh thank you! I'm really pleased that you want to continue reviewing even though your review thread's closed as clearly that means you like this story so thank you!! ♥ And I'm sorry there isn't a fourth chapter at the moment, but I'll try and get one up pronto!

That's great to hear! Yeah, a lot of people did want to know about that and I felt I needed to include that, but it felt odd with Albus and Alicia since they've moved on so it would strange having them dredge up the past, that's why I thought her conversation with Roxanne would be a good way to include that information and give Roxy some ammunition to dislike her without having to make up and explain a fictional situation. Poor Albus, indeed :(

Woo! Alicia is deliberately selfish, because I wanted her to have a flaw that influences her life, although I hope it doesn't overpower the story! I'm pleased that she comes across as a fascinating character and I hope that continues as more chapters are written and posted!

You are mostly correct about Marin! She does have connections to the Muggle world and she is Miss Perfect, but public relations isn't really her forte. ;)

Thank you so much, I'm really pleased that you're enjoying this story and I look forward to seeing you again when the next chapter's up! Thanks so much for a great review! ♥


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