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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hi Isobel!

Please please please forgive how long this review has taken. I honestly just haven't managed to get around to any reviewing until now so I'm very sorry!

First things first, can I say how much I'm enjoying this story? I'm actually kind of sad I haven't got another chapter to read afterwards. I am letting my review thread close but I will keep my eye on it so I can continue reading it!

So your first AOC was about Roxie and Alicia's conversation. I thought you handled everything really well, especially as we now know everything that happened between Alicia and Albus. I must say, I feel so so sorry for Albus. Bless him that's so awful what she did. I can totally understand why Roxie acted the way she did toward Alicia, I would have acted that way too!

In the next scene I again thought you did a good job of the conversation. It flowed well and felt really natural. Alicia does come across a little selfish and determined to do whatever to get what she wants but I still find her really fascinating as a character so great job!

I honestly want to give you my theories on who Marin is but I really don't know. I get the feeling she's got some connection to the Muggle world as Alicia seems to think she would be good as a Muggle PR for the business... I also wonder if she's also the "Miss Perfect" she was looking for for the job!

Anyway, great chapter, I like the pace, it's keeping me interested and excited as to what's going to happen next! I want to know! I look forward to your next update!

Lauren :)

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