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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
I was dangerously distracted by fun on the forums, and it seems as though I had forgotten about all of the lovely stories I was reading! Now I'm behind!

The opening scene of this chapter is fairly heartbreaking. It's nice to see the fragile and vulnerable side of Sydney when she's not amongst classmates with her kick-butt attitude. It's a good reminder that she's had bad things happen to her, and is having a difficult time outside of what people typically see.

Then, as we move through the morning scene, we return to a pleasantly typical Sydney -- who we all love. I find it funny that she almost superstitiously believes that wearing matching panties will give her the ability to complete her day without folly.

The fact that Lily misses James' attention is certainly evidence that she harbors feelings towards him, something everyone else seems to know except for her. Sydney's attempt to reconcile with Ashley is also nice -- a girl needs her friends.

Sydney reminds me of a sexy predator going after her also attractive prey, the way she's speaking to and acting around Sirius in class. Poor boy, he so deserves it ;). Sirius seems to be taking the bait, given his reaction to Andy's advances.

Sirius' perspective was fun in this chapter, as it gave insight to exactly HOW Sirius was reacting to Sydney's ploy. Evidently, it's working oh-so-well for Sydney ^.^.

Great chapter!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I love these long ones! (innuendo)

Please keep reading, the next chapter is underway!


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