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Review:Ravenclaw333 says:
Hey, here for that review swap you offered!

I really loved this piece (and I love the song too, and now I won't be able to listen to it without thinking of Draco/Astoria!) I haven't read a lot of Draco/Astoria, but I always love seeing how people interpret the relationship and how they characterise Astoria - and I have to say, I do love your Astoria! The way you've described her longing for freedom and love of travel is fantastic, and the way you've made it clear that her marriage to Draco isn't giving up that freedom and adventure, but rather exchanging it for a different kind of adventure, is awesome. You've given some good insight into her situation as well, especially the upper class nature of her social circle now, and how she feels out of place and insecure in their presence. And the relationship you've developed here between Draco and Astoria is equal parts sweet and passionate, and I'm shipping it so hard right now! Overall a lovely bit of writing, and you should definitely write more of this pairing!

Author's Response: Hi!

Thank you so much for wanting to reviewswap with me! :)

Oh right, the song. I forgot to credit it at the Author's Note. I didn't use the lyrics, but I still think it's polite to credit your inspiration :) Good thing I remembered that when you mentioned the song!

I can't stop thinkingg about Draco and Astoria too whenever I hear the song, haha :) It fits them quite well, sort of dark and romantic at the same time.

You've been very spot on with your observation! Astoria is very insecure when she's around her so-called friends, and to be honest - when they gossip like that all the time, I would be insecure as well.

Yes! I will definitely write another story with this pair. It was so fun to write this story, it was so different and new to me and I enjoyed it very much.

I'm so glad you liked my story :) And thank you again, for reviewing.

- Avi

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