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Review:Ginny says:
Oh my god!!! What an amazing chapter, but what an evil cliffhanger! Even though it was rather short, you did a great job with the battle. And I am sure there is more to come.
Narcissa, of course. That makes so much sense. I imagined the new spy for the Order would be a man. I actually went back and checked and saw you never mentioned it.
We don't know of any good guys who were killed so far, but Fred, George and Lee and Luna, Neville and Draco seem to be in grave danger. I never thought I would say this, but I really hope Draco survives his injuries. His character developed amazingly throughout your story and him killing Lucius might just be the most awesome moment in your story (so far :) ).
Voldemort's plan makes perfect sense, certainly with the reason you gave. I'm so excited for the last chapter!

Author's Response: This chapter was indeed shorter than I anticipated, but I didn't want to stretch out the fighting too much as that has bothered me in quite some other stories. There is indeed a bit more action to come in the last chapter.

I did indeed never mention the gender of the spy. I was afraid that it would stand out and that it would be obvious that the spy was Narcissa. I'm glad I was able to surprise you!

I'm very happy you liked the character development for Draco in this story. I have gotten quite a bit of bad reactions about him actually. A lot of people thought Draco changed too drastically.

Thank you so much for another review!


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