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Review:oldnumberseven says:
Ee, I'm really starting to love this fic and it's only the 3rd chapter!

Your writing and flow is amazing, it really is. I feel like all of the events are believable and connected - that is to say, nothing drastic has happened that would be out of the ordinary. I guess I say that because a lot of fics have the love interest bump into a Marauder and then have their whole life change. While it seems Eden's getting some flack for it, she's not head over heels. Well, not yet anyways :P

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for your compliments! What you said is very much on par with what I believe with fics too. It's so easy to have a main character who becomes defined by their love interest. And I'm not going to lie -- this is going to be very Sirius-heavy at times, but I'm going to try to keep Eden as true to her nature as much as possible too.

Thanks again for taking the time to read and review! I can't tell you how much I appreciate it. And sorry if I tend to waffle a bit. Next chapter's in the queue. :)

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