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Review:oldnumberseven says:
Told you I'd be back :P

Another fantastic chapter. It's really refreshing to read things in Eden's POV because unlike most fics, she doesn't spend her days thinking about the Marauders (hence why she doesn't know Peter's name - that bit had me snorting out loud!). They're just some troublemakers who are a year older than her. It also makes for interesting canon moments, if you know what I mean. It's fun to read Lily and James flirting from a different person's perspective!

Author's Response: Ah, fancy seeing you here. ;) Writing from Eden's POV has its advantages and disadvantages. The former being that I discover everything as she does, and the latter being that she can be pretty biased. But yes, I am trying to stress that distance from canon, mostly because I'd like to develop all the characterisations separately before they start being defined by their romantic relationships (with an exception to James and Lily of course -- they are too far gone by this point haha).

Glad you stuck with me. This was probably my favourite chapter so far. :)


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