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Review:Ravenclaw333 says:
This is such a sweet story, I love it! The way you've characterised all of them - the friendship between James and Sirius and the jokes they come up with, Remus as the voice of reason - is fantastic, a great interpretation of what we know from the canon. I loved the snapshot of James, Lily and Harry as a little family, with Sirius and Remus a part of it as well - it's just really, really sweet. And your insight into Lily as well - her restlessness and isolation, and the toll that aspect of the war has taken on her - is such an important point and you've described it really well. There's a note of tragedy here as well - the pranks showing how young James and Sirius really are, while the shadow of the war and James and Lily's parenthood has forced them to grow up too fast. A phenomenal piece of writing!

Author's Response: Hi!

You were the first person to review my updated version of this and I am so glad that you liked it. I rewrote it and was nervous because it ended up being a lot longer. I'm so glad that it didn't seem to long.

Wow. I was so excited to see that you liked the balance between the silliness of James and Sirius with Lily's fears. I really did enjoy writing this one, so thanks for the kind words!

Beth


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