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Review:oldnumberseven says:
So I decided to take a mini break from work and read some fanfiction ... and boy, I was not disappointed. I'm usually not a fan of diary entries, but I really like Eden's POV in the book and in real life as well. She's fresh and original and I love the little details you add to give her background some life - her french heritage, her socialite mother, her witty best friend and her easy going brother. The bit with James and Lily was great as well!

Well, I only have time to read the first chapter of this fic, but don't worry, I'll be back XD

Author's Response: My word, you are making me smile so big right now. Reviewing every chapter? You are a gem. And now I am going to reply to every review. ^_^

I agree with you about the diary-entry style. It's not something I usually consider with writing as it is overused and often pointless, but this was an exception because it actually tied in with Eden's character. We'll see how it goes, ha. I'm really enjoying writing Lily and the Marauders from an outsider's perspective, so it's great to know someone else appreciates it too!

Thank you thank you thank you for checking this out!

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