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Review:potterfan310 says:
New chapter, yay!

I wasn't expecting Al's reaction to be like that, but at least he'll have time to think about everything and get his head around it.

I know Rose will come around, that's one thing for sure. And Ellis, is it possibly to love him even more? He' just fab and I love his characterisation. "One question," he asked. "Do I get to be godfather?" - Ellis just needs to be, he has too because I just know he's going to be Emilia's rock through out this.

oh Emilia, you need to watch Doctor Whom then you'll get the reference.

I absolutely love the fact that you've got Emilia in her kitchen and then Albus in the Weasley's, and as you said their just separated by glass. I think it's really sweet! :D

I was not expecting Marin to say that! :O

I'm curious as to why nothing has been said about Emlia's birth, maybe their not her real parents? Or she was born via a surrogate or something.

Emila's is not going to go through with it, she can't. Not only that I just have a vision of Albus (or maybe Rose)turning up and stopping her or something.

I know you said on tumblr about Marin and Albus having a thing (which I'm really intrigued about, how did happen? etc...) so maybe Marin is seriously jealous hence her giving Emila the information and making sure she booked an appointment at the clinic.

I am so excited for the next one and I can't wait!!

Soph xx

P.s I think I said it before but I love the new ending bit of chapter four, it flows so nicely!!!

Author's Response: I hate your reviews because they make me want to give spoilers ;)

Okay I'm kidding, I really love reading them :O but I am going to be a tad ambiguous because if not I might give stuff away and I just... don't want that.

Anyway, first of all you haven't even seen the worst of his reaction yet. It's going to get so so much more worse before there's even the hint of it getting better. It's so angsty oh my gosh.

I think Ellis will definitely be a shoo-in for Godfather at the rate he's going! But you'll just have to see, who knows where this story and its characters will fully take me yet.

Ahhh, Marin's reaction was something I was nervous about getting right. Purely because it does rely heavily on knowing things that the reader doesn't know yet. I promise by the time this fic ends, you'll be able to look back at Marin's initial reaction and completely understand.

And as I've said to a few other reviewers - what kind of pregnancy story would this be if the baby was aborted six chapters in? ;)

I'm glad you're so excited for the next chapter! I'm afraid it's going to be another few weeks yet because I have exams from the 13th-22nd so : but I'm trying to write little tid bits here and there for it at the moment until I have time to sit down and fully write it.

Thanks for the read and the lovely review!

- Jess xo

(P.s. yeah, you sent me an ask on tumblr I think? Thank you again though!)

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