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Review:wonweasley says:
I'm super mad at myself for not keeping up and reviewing every chapter, but time is just not on my side right now. Basically you're amazing, alright? I envy your ability to write distinctive, 3D characters - even the minor ones. I love that we can get a good sense of them and their role in the larger plot, despite the bias of Aislin's perspective. Moody is definitely still doing it for me. Well done there.

Also HELLO SIRIUS. I enjoy the story's pacing, and the fact that Sirius appears only in short bursts makes me treasure those moments even more. Needless to say I am excited to see more of him. I want to hate Cuffe for getting in the way, but I mostly pity him. Poor, obnoxious man.

The Aislin/Remus friendship is coming along nicely. I'm interested to see whether Remus' awkwardness (about where to put his hands when Aislin hugged him, for example) is a product of his own possible feelings for her, or whether he's aware of Sirius' feelings and senses a conflict there. He's adorable, either way.

And finally, to the main plot! Just incredible. And terrifying. The fact that North is performing sacrifices to get magic?! It must've been pretty strong to be able to get him out of a Ministry holding cell. Or maybe he has an accomplice on the inside? My god, the anticipation is killing me!

Just altogether well done. I will try to keep up as much as possible. But know that you have a very dedicated fan right here. 10/10 flawless story.

Author's Response: :'D Thank you so much, this is lovely. Sirius will get some screen-time in the next chapter (the wedding!) but he's definitely going to continue to be more of a secondary character. I've had so much fun with the development of Aislin/Remus' friendship, and also with the murders (maybe that's morbid)! Thanks so much for reviewing, glad you're enjoying the story! Next chapter is in the queue :)

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