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Review:Ginny says:
Oh my god! This was just awesome. You created the tension before the battle perfectly. I'm actually sitting on the edge of my seat. I love that you paired up Fred and Luna and what a time to do it! They should balance each other out quite well :D
I like how Harry takes the lead. It reminds me of your first battle scene in What If', when the Death Eaters attacked Hogsmeade, when he stepped up and took hold of the situation. At least now they are more prepared.
The final conversation between Harry and Remus was brief, but very well written. You can see that both of them know that there is a good chance they might never see each other again. I really hope that won't be the case though. I absolutely love Remus, especially in this story.
I was rather disappointed that Draco seems to have saved his own skin, but I doubted him before and was proven wrong quickly. I hope he comes through in the end.
I'm so excited for the next chapter, but I'm also kind of scared to read on. I know people are gonna die during the battle and I love all of your characters so much... Absolutely amazing story so far and I just know that you will nail the ending too :)

Author's Response: That was more or less my reasoning behind Fred and Luna :) I realize it's kind of an unusual pairing, but it made sense in my head..

Harry definitely has gathered a lot of experience since that battle in Hogsmeade and his friends in the D.A. trust him blindly.

I love writing the relationship between Harry and Remus. I think they are both the last remaining link to Harry's parents and Sirius for each other. I see that you already finished the story, so you know what happened (or didn't happen) to Remus.

Thanks you very much for your kind review. It is highly appreciated.

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