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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
Hey there, dear!

First of all, Congratulations on winning Featured Story! :D And now... on to your review! :)

I think this is just the most perfect one-shot I've ever read. It's not long, but it's so full of so many different things: sadness, happiness, love, hate, bravery, sacrifice... Gah! It's just SO good!

I really loved how you showed several different moments in Lily's life where she sacrificed herself for someone else, because that really gives a lot of insight into who Lily is as a character. And I also think you did a fantastic job of showing how very young Lily and James still were when they got married and had Harry; yes, of course, they were adults, but they were still young and had their whole lives ahead of them, and it's a shame that they had to live with such constant fear.

I love the rebellious nature you gave to Lily! And the description of her final moments - just trying to touch Harry one last time... it's so... her.

I think everything flowed wonderfully and there were no spelling or grammar mistakes either, so kudos on that as well!

Great job, dear!! 10/10 and going in my favorites!

Author's Response: Thanks, Jayde! :D

This is such a lovely review - you're so kind! ♥

Ahhh I can't even articulate how much I love this review, thank you thank you thank you! ♥

- Kayla :)

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