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Review:luciusobsessed says:
Yay two updates!! I'm eating from my Nutella jar as I'm writing this :p

First off let me say I always seem to find myself at the snacks table wherever I am, so that was a great way to start off the chapter. It made me want to make myself a sandwich.

Aww Ben is trying to make up for it. That makes me happy and he's getting back on my good side. But he will never top Sirius. I just have a feeling that Ben will do something to mess up and Sirius will swoop in to the rescue soon enough.

I love the humor you've given Remus. I feel like most people portray him as the serious friend when he's obviously a Marauder for a reason. When he said 'Siri-poo' I died LOL.

I like how Rainne has a plan B. That's how I am too, I always try to have a plan B haha, it calms my nerves. And when James instinctively grabbed Lily's hands, IT WAS THE CUTEST THING EVER. AND SHE DIDN'T TRY TO STOP HIM! *sobbing*

I want to write more but I'm super excited there's another wonderful chapter waiting for me after this so I'm off to eat more Nutella and hopefully read some drama!!

Author's Response: I love that you're always eating when you read Beneath. Rainne would totally hate you for it hahaha.

I do too! It's always the main attraction lol.

I've been trying to tell everyone that Ben really isn't a bad guy! Haha but I mean who am I kidding, nobody compares to Sirius ;)

Remus is totally hilarious! You're completely right, he's just as much a jokester as the rest of the Marauders. He just also knows when he needs to be serious (get it? heh).

Gotta throw some Jily in there ;) I couldn't resist, they're so cute!

Thanks for reviewing!!


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