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Review:potterfan310 says:
Hi!

I love how you've started this chaper off, it's a great visual!!! And as for James, I love him already :D James sure sounds like a really charmer; - "James Potter who is currently picking the fluff out of his belly button." Lol!

Ahh I love it when there's mention to the characters from the books, such as Cootes, Spinnet and Vane. It just makes it more perfect because the books live on.

Rose's friends/dorm mates are all super nice and I can't wait to see more of Rose and them, well all of them except Hope.

Scorpius! I'm assuming he's the bad boy type! and it's fab to see it, because in most of the stories I read he's a nice good boy so it's a pleasent change. The way you've characterisaed him so far is brilliant and I love it.

They're bonding of sorts over mandrakes and talking about evil.

Hugo! oh my god, cliffhanger. What's he doing? I'm sooo intrigued by Hugo and of course now Alec.

There were a few litte things like grammar mistakes or missing a letter but nothing a read-over won't sort.

I've probably said love way to many times in this review but I am crazy over your characterisations of Rose and Scorpius as well as James because they're brilliant and it's so unsual to read them as enemies rather than friends/going out.

Can't wait for the next one.

-Potterfan310
Soph x

Author's Response: Hey!
Wow thank you so much! This makes me so happy you have no idea!
James is most definitely my favourite character to write and he'll be being featured lots more throughout the next couple of chapters.
I absolutely love bringing surnames from the original books through into next-gen too, I feel like if all their parents played Quidditch then they are likely to play too!
I'm really glad that you like them; Tori and Cara were both amazing to write and I'll also be introducing Erin and Hope (sorry ;) ) throughout the next few chapters.
Scorpius is a bit of a want-to-be bad boy, yes haha! Thanks, I'm really glad you like him because I certainly do! Oh yes, there's nothing more romantic than mandrakes and death eaters haha.
All, or at least some, will be revealed very soon in terms of Hugo and hopefully we'll find out what's up with Alec too.
As for grammar, yep that's something I definitely need to work on! I tend to get a little over-excited once I finish a chapter haha.
Again, thank you so much and who knows, maybe their "enemy-ship" will blossom into something else?
Thank you again and I can't wait to see what you think of the next one- I hope I don't disapoint!
-Alice x


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