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Review:Ravenclaw333 says:
This is such an amazing piece, and certainly worth the wait! I loved everything about this - the dual perspectives of James and Lily, the way you've characterised Ella and Marlene, the way you've dealt with major events and themes without ever overdramatising it - very well done. You've done an amazing job at capturing the emotions here as well - the confusion, grief, regret, the 'what ifs' for Lily even when she's with James. An original idea that still fits perfectly into the canon - I particularly liked how you've included the shadow the war has cast over everyone's lives, and the detail about Ella dying heroically. Fantastic work, and thank you so much for entering the challenge!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really pleased you consider it worth the wait (sorry again about not getting it in on time but I was frantically writing to get it done and I simply couldn't go faster) and that you enjoyed it! I wanted to write it from James' POV because that just felt most natural out of him, Lily and Ella since he was the least biased. It's great to hear that you felt I captured the emotions well, since that was what I was trying to do -- I wanted to do the ship justice and of course in an era where homosexuality is frowned upon, there were so many more complications. Thank you so much for awarding me first place, I'm truly honoured! ^.^

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