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Review:Flying mandarin says:
Great chapter!
I did so not see Eylan as a homosexual but hey, that makes Corames more likely to happen so it's really a win-win situation. Especially since Cora just said she fancies him! Whoowhooo :D

But to be fair I prefer James POV. It may be because you described the make-up and clothing in a lot of detail. It's nice to know her dress is pretty and that she looked sophisticated but I don't really care to be honest. I would reread this chapter however because there are a few typos that need fixing up.

Also: Andy was adorable. I really really like her and how she is wholy accepted in the group even though she is so much younger.

Keep writing

Author's Response: Aw thank you! And I apologise thoroughly for it, I'm definitely going to go back through all the chapters and sort out my grammar and spelling, it's terrible I know but hey ho, I'm slowly workin on it. Probably didn't help that I wrote this late at night hahaha but anyway thank you so much for reviewing and you'll he happy to know next chapter is back into James' perspective ! I have it written so it's just uploading it - if my laptop will turn on... So bear with me and again thank you for reviewing :)))

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